Senryu

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A Senryu! A traditional Japanese poetry form, distinct from Haiku. Here’s my attempt:

Snowflakes gently fall
Blanketing the garden gray
Lonely winter sigh

Notes on Senryu composition guidelines:

  • Consists of three lines, with a syllable count of 5-7-5.
  • Typically focuses on human nature, emotions, or social situations, rather than natural imagery (like Haiku).
  • May use humor, irony, or satire to convey its message.
  • Often features a “cutting word” (kireji) at the end of the poem, which adds a sense of tension or finality.

In this Senryu, I’ve tried to capture a wistful winter scene, with the snowfall serving as a backdrop for a lonely and contemplative mood.

Prompt
Senryu, Haiku, poetry form, Japan, human nature, emotions, social situations, syllables, snowflakes, garden, winter, loneliness, finality, tension. , anthro, (realistic fur, detailed fur texture:1.2), colorful, HD, sharp focus, stunningly beautiful, hyper-detailed, HDR+, 64K, Avant-garde, unusual, experimental, avant-garde art

Negative prompt
ugly, deformed, noisy, blurry, low contrast, extra eyes, bad eyes, ugly eyes, imperfect eyes, deformed pupils, deformed iris, cross-eyed, poorly drawn face, bad face, fused face, ugly face, worst face, unrealistic skin texture, out of frame, poorly drawn hands, cloned face, double face, blurry, bad quality

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