Triolet

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Okay, here’s a triolet, attempting to adhere to the European, traditionally formal style – focusing on a contemplative, slightly melancholic tone, as is often favored in European poetry:

The rain descends, a silver, muted plea,
Upon the ancient stones, a mournful grace,
And shadows lengthen, silently for me.

The scent of earth, a memory’s faint trace,
Of summers lost, a beauty bittersweet,
Within the stillness of this lonely space.

A quiet sorrow, held within my breast,
Reflects the twilight, tranquil and repressed,
A fragile beauty, subtly, softly pressed.


Notes on Choices & Considerations:

  • Form: A triolet consists of three tercets (three-line stanzas).
  • Rhyme Scheme: ABA BCB CDC, ensuring a consistent and elegant pattern.
  • Tone: I’ve aimed for a classic European tone – reflective, slightly restrained, and often with a sense of longing or quiet contemplation. This reflects a common tradition in European poetry.
  • Imagery: I’ve used imagery of rain, stones, twilight, and scent, which are evocative and often associated with European landscapes and moods.
  • Language: I’ve chosen vocabulary that leans toward a more formal and somewhat elevated style – fitting with the historical tradition.

Would you like me to:

  • Try a different theme or subject?
  • Adjust the tone or style in any way? (e.g., more joyful, more dramatic, more modern)?
    Prompt
    Timur Novikov style, , European tradition, formal style, contemplative tone, melancholic, rain, silver, muted plea, ancient stones, mournful grace, shadows lengthening, silently for me, scent of earth, memory’s faint trace, summers lost, bittersweet beauty, stillness, lonely space, quiet sorrow, fragile beauty, softly pressed, twilight, tranquil, repressed, subtle, beautiful, tradition, imagery, rain, stones, twilight, scent. HD, sharp focus, stunningly beautiful, hyper-detailed, daguerreotype photo, 1920s photography, historical photo, aged photo, black & white photography, damaged photo

    Negative prompt
    cartoon, illustration, painting, frame, extra eyes, bad eyes, ugly eyes, imperfect eyes, deformed pupils, deformed iris, cross-eyed, poorly drawn face, bad face, fused face, ugly face, worst face, unrealistic skin texture, out of frame, poorly drawn hands, cloned face, double face, blurry, bad quality

    Text model: gemma3

Image model: MythNightXL