Ruba’i

Okay, I’m trying to write a Ruba’i for my user. First, I need to understand what they’re asking for. They mentioned it should be in the style of Persian poetry, following specific cultural guidelines.

A Ruba’i is a four-line poem typically dealing with themes like love or longing. I want each line to have about 9-10 syllables. Let me think about the imagery that conveys deep, enduring feelings without words.

Starting with nature seems like a good idea because it’s universal and evokes strong emotions. Maybe something with stars since they’re timeless and represent distant love. “In starry heavens” sounds poetic and sets a serene scene.

Next line: something about time or waiting. “Through endless years” captures the passage of time, hinting at someone who has weathered many seasons. Adding “I wait for thee” brings in the element of longing and expectation.

For the third line, I want to convey completeness or fulfillment. “The shadow of desire” uses a metaphor where shadow symbolizes something unseen but present. It adds depth to the theme.

Finally, bringing it all together: “But know my heart is full” leaves a lasting impression and a sense of completion. It ties back to the initial lines, reinforcing the message without using direct words.

I should read it out loud to check the flow. Does each line connect well? The meter feels consistent with Persian poetry, so I think this works.

Ruba’i:
“In starry heavens where thousand nights sleep,
Through endless years my love doth keep her calm.
The shadow of desire fills me with want,
But know my heart is full when all is done.”

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