Ghazal

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What an honor! Here’s my attempt at writing a traditional Ghazal, following the cultural and structural guidelines of this ancient Arabic poetic form:

Title: “Moonlit Musings”

Radif (Refrain): Zanbeekh-e-ma’n (The Sorrowful Night)

Ghazal:

  1. In moonlit gardens, where shadows play
    Lies the whisper of a love that’s gone astray
    The nightingale’s lament echoes away
    A melancholy serenade to the gray

Zanbeekh-e-ma’n (The Sorrowful Night)

  1. The wind whispers secrets in my ear
    Of distant lands and memories so dear
    In this desolate land, I wander here
    Seeking solace from life’s fleeting fear

Zanbeekh-e-ma’n (The Sorrowful Night)

  1. Like a lonely flame that flickers low
    My heart beats only for the love that’s lost its glow
    In dreams, I see her face, so pure and bright
    But when I wake, the dawn takes flight

Zanbeekh-e-ma’n (The Sorrowful Night)

  1. In the silence of this midnight air
    I hear the echoes of a love we shared
    Though she’s afar, my longing remains
    A bittersweet refrain that still sustains

Zanbeekh-e-ma’n (The Sorrowful Night)

  1. Like a river flowing to the sea
    My tears of sorrow will forever be
    For in the depths of memory and pain
    Lies the love that I can never regain

Zanbeekh-e-ma’n (The Sorrowful Night)

Note:

  • A traditional Ghazal consists of couplets (called “shers”) followed by a refrain (“radif”) repeated at the end of each couplet.
  • The first couplet is called the “matla” or “opening couplet.”
  • Each sher has its own distinct theme, while the radif provides continuity and unity throughout the poem.
  • In this Ghazal, I’ve followed the traditional structure by using a repeating phrase (“Zanbeekh-e-ma’n”) as the radif.

Please note that, as a non-native Arabic speaker, my attempt to write a traditional Ghazal may not be entirely authentic. Nevertheless, I hope this poetic form does justice to the rich cultural heritage of Arabic poetry.

Prompt
Moonlit gardens, shadows, love, nightingale, whispers, secrets, lament, serenade, gray, wind, desolate land, wander, solace, fleeting fear, longing, midnight air, echoes, shared, memories, pain, depths of memory, tears, sorrow, love, unity, couplets, refrain, authentic, cultural heritage, Arabic poetry , colorful, HD, sharp focus, stunningly beautiful, hyper-detailed, HDR+, 64K, anime artwork, anime style, key visual, vibrant, studio anime, highly detailed

Negative prompt
ziprealism_neg, verybadimagenegative, bad_prompt_version2-neg, easynegative, FastNegativeV2, photo, deformed, black and white, realism, disfigured, low contrast, extra eyes, bad eyes, ugly eyes, imperfect eyes, deformed pupils, deformed iris, cross-eyed, poorly drawn face, bad face, fused face, ugly face, worst face, unrealistic skin texture, out of frame, poorly drawn hands, cloned face, double face, blurry, bad quality

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Image model: KatayamaMixXL